Elrond
11-15-2001, 07:59 PM
Thanks, I had every intention of reading her stories but it's been a busy week and I was starting to worry that they would disappear before I ever got to them.
Hmm, a story in first person. Interesting. I'm enjoying it so far, but you (Rose) need to add in a description of the main character. I want to see hair whipping in the wind, but is it blonde, black, red or brown? Also, skin color would be nice. I feel so rascist assuming that she is a blonde haired, blue eyed white girl =)
And I can't help but wonder how on earth she rode from Minoc to Moonglow. That's an island, you know. It's well written and enjoyable. I couldn't just skim it, it was grabbing enough to make me read it =)
Oh! And another suggestion for Rose and Dor. Make a webpage that has it all laid out so's Dor can post a link somewhere, like the top post on the board or something.<P ID="edit"><FONT class="small">Edited by Elrond on 11/15/01 10:11 PM.</FONT></P>
Hmm, a story in first person. Interesting. I'm enjoying it so far, but you (Rose) need to add in a description of the main character. I want to see hair whipping in the wind, but is it blonde, black, red or brown? Also, skin color would be nice. I feel so rascist assuming that she is a blonde haired, blue eyed white girl =)
And I can't help but wonder how on earth she rode from Minoc to Moonglow. That's an island, you know. It's well written and enjoyable. I couldn't just skim it, it was grabbing enough to make me read it =)
Oh! And another suggestion for Rose and Dor. Make a webpage that has it all laid out so's Dor can post a link somewhere, like the top post on the board or something.<P ID="edit"><FONT class="small">Edited by Elrond on 11/15/01 10:11 PM.</FONT></P>